Aww! I love this concept to this poem.. its soo beautiful! The flow was nice... and the way you worded it was great!

I love you dear,
i love you so.
Please don't ever
let me go.

^^ That stanza was amazing! 5/5

I enjoyed it.

Very sweet, the rhyme scheme was a good touch, loved the message and emotions behind the piece, loved it keep up the good work.

Very sweet :] Keep it up!

You sound as though u more of a humble person than anything else,
u have brilliant writting skills that i cant deny and wow the beauty in ur words this is nice.
keep them coming

Nice poem...you use great wordings ! i like that...keep it up ! i give 5/5 ..=)

I like it alot, its sweet
when you wrote "i can't get no rest' it is a contradiction. it should be "i can get no rest' or 'i can't rest' good job anywayz
kelliexx