I don't usually go for slang poems because they don't usually hold my interest; but this one was different. With a few changes I believe that this poem would be very popular. I don't really know much about slang, but isn't it possible to write it without using single letters and numbers for whole words? If so I would suggest you edit it because to me that takes away from the meaning of the poem. But as I said I don't know much about slang. I think the concept was good, but it could use a little more imagery. The flow was also kind of awkward, but they could be because I'm not familiar with slang. Overall I think you did a good job and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Letty

The beginnng line held my attention. He once was my reality and my world, but now the times have changed and now he's a figment of my imagination. Funny how we pretend and front, but in conclusion, they still are our reality. That was a good line. We all do and say things to hurt people, but in the end, we hurt more becaues we hurt them, well I know I hurt more.