U are too sweet thx. im blushing

Thx

Good poem. i liked the line about being bound by chains. very good line. just fix the second to last line...the little symbol thingys that this website adds sometimes is there. thats all though. 5/5

This poem is really good. I can definitely relate to it...and it does have a lot of sybolism.

Deep..i love the ending but the whole poem has some very strong words..5/5

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The whole poem has such deep thoughts and wording really good!!!

Really well done, truely!!!
Ive given you a well earned 5!
And thank you also for your kind comment on my own work
Take care
Ayesha
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Interesting poem .... interesting direction to take out of a poem ... I loved it and its uniqueness ... great job

Ill have to agree with everyone else, that was really good

Great poem 5/5

Wow, once again amazeing "Thanks to you theses chains im bound" that was great ^^ I could't of thought of something like that even if i tried o.0

:Holds up card once again:

5/5

woot woot!

Wow i like this poem alot espesialythe line about chains:)
5/5

Wow really good poem it had such strong emotion definite 5/5 <33

The flow of this one is really good. I love it. Great job.

Love it so scary but not in that way in a [whoa] way...