I get the message to this piece.
nice. :] an interesting write.

So true!

So true...Hate is a powerful word....xoxo

The message in this poem is nice and the best part of it.

The message in this poem is clear, but it needs work. There are spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors. Never use a letter for a word. What I mean by that is never write the letter U instead of the word you; it's annoying to me and turns off my interest. This poem could also use some formatting. I suggest you edit, and then resubmit it. I will be more than happy to reread it and comment again. : )

Letty