Aww this was beautiful. I could really feel the love you expressed throughout the poem. It was soo genuine. I could relate with this feeling of love. The descriptions you gave were flawless. Well done *5/5*

I found this poem to be quite sweet and touching. The rhymes were a little too basic for my liking but that was nothing to trash the kind words and touching emotions. In the first stanza to me the rhymes were too similar within the second and fourth line. They seemed to touch too closely if you understand what I mean. Other then that a simple yet effective love piece. Well done. ~Mel

AWWWW this was so sweet.
whoever this Allison girl is, she is very lucky.
you portrayed your feelings for her so well.
5/5

Bubs..,
AAAWWWWW!!!! it was sooooo cute i loved it! and im sure if Allison read it im sure shed like it too!! i loved how it was ur own originalty. i loved it! well just wanted to give this some Kate spice back lol.. 5/5 always
love ya!
Ur *fav* sis
Lizit~

Aww very very cute.. its obvious you have true feelings for this allison girl.. and you did a great job putting it to words.. very nice job! i loved it and it was really sweet and filled with your emotion.. great job and keep it up ! =)

Good poem. I could definitely tell you wrote it about someone real, who you really care about. The flow was a bit off, and word choice was light but the emotion and images in this were a great read. Keep it up. [: I loved it. 5/5

I'll probably get shot for this but hey, what the hell: AWWWWW~
It's such a short, sweet, cute poem, I can't help but give this a 5. The emotion is just awe-inspiringly abundant, brilliant work!

Oh,this is so nice!

The poem was indeed filled with love but I believe you could have added much more depth i do not mean this as an insult, i truly did like your poem 4/5