Woah. Nice writing Amber. 5/5. :)

5 from me ^^

Cant wait for part 2

Wow that is so intense i loved this poem i was at the edge of my seat the whole time waiting for more...good job 5/5

5/5!

Brilliant poem!

Keep it up!

Danielle
xx

Wow this was good. You never lost the beauty of the heat.