Comments : I wish..

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    I just made a poem with this title just then, lol. well this was way better than mine, and the wording was fabulous. excellent.

    5/5 David

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Haha. thanks so much. it's a good title..

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Its really good!!
    keep up de good work!!

    cheers

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Of Death

    Great poem hunni!

    5/5 keep up the great work

    n thnx for commentin mine=]

    x o x o

  • 16 years ago

    by SpEcIaLmE

    The first stanza stood out the most to me it really seems to get the point across and is clear on what the poem is about
    its a great poem
    keep up the good work