Thats deep...

I thought you did a great job writing this keep up the good work

Amazing write...i enjoyed reading it. it was
very sad but an eye opener.

I had to keep reading the poem nice job 5/5

I loved this poem truthfully... It was filled with emotion, and as I read this poem I felt it... That is a great thing... YES KEEP IT UP!

Wow this poem is amazing
and it says so much
my favotie part is She couldn't bare the pain that she wouldn't show, cuz i can relate to it so much
great poem
5/5

--jess

Damn...
That was just so sad!! but I loved how you wrote it!! good work! it was very emotional!

It so sad but so real at the same time. It's an excellent poem.

Sad :[

this is sooo well written and tells such a great story.

but it almost made me cry!

nice write 5/5

Thats sad but you did grat on it 100/100 :]]

I love this amazing poem. So deep. It's great. 5/5...would go higher if I could.

<3 bella

Awwww

soooo sweet and sad at the same time

Wow nice poem i give it a 5/5

That was wonderful.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I've seen a bunch of suicide poems, and wrote quite a few myself, and this one was one of the best!
You did a great great job!