Comments : Teardrops on my Guitar

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, incredible piece, it is somehow absolutely mind-blowing and you again intertwined great beauty and sadness and created this masterpiece.
    I enjoyed in every line and I absolutely admire your choice of words, you kept my attention with that fantastic rhythm.
    Well done!

  • 16 years ago

    by TheRapture03

    Wow, that was really good. You used alot of strong words, and it painted a really good visual. Idk why, but it reminded me of "While My Gutiar Gently Weeps" by The Beatles. Good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Gentle voice caresses puzzled feelings,
    inhaling, as I close my eyes,
    scents of this night, assorting fallacies;
    Teardrops ornament silhouette of a melody.

    fav lines,
    lol you stole the title from taylor swift! Im telling! Just kidding. anyhow great poem. I play guitar but i always seem to write about my piano instead. great piece :) keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Kelsie

    Your ability to piece words together is simply astonishing, you are probably one of the best writers i have read for a while.

    " Teardrops ornament silhouette of a melody"
    ^^^gave me chills.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Wow wonderful job with this! You have such a way with words, this poem is so beautiful, yet so sad and heart-breaking at the same time. You did a great job on this! the flow was right on too by the way :] keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Your poems is really rare.. you hav a different way of expressing yourself by the way you write your poems and the use of words... obviously this is another tremendously good poem! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The first thing that pooped out to me was the flawless use of language. Very effective. It really drew in my attention from the beginning and I was eager to read more. The title was appealing and captured my attention. Well done *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Cooper

    Oh, how beautifully you can make words flow together ... a deep and gentle stream of poetry.
    This simply captivated my mind and soul, and your nearly flawless, and thought-provoking words emanate emotions and imagery.
    Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    Yes I do agree with the people who have posted comments on your poem.

    You have brilliant skills in writing poetry.
    "bravo"!!! @--,-'-- I lay a rose apon a master piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sheets colored with crimson hues
    enwrap around strangling guitar strings
    that whisper softly chords of tinted song
    mirroring teary soul's particles

    This is my favorite stanza.
    You painted a very sad yet meaningful picture for us readers!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid