I guess 99% of people should have the same fate(broken heart) but they should move on no matter how hard.

you deserve better than what you have so you should not give up...

my best part was :
"Dont worry,I'm gona be ok soon.
Maybe I'll learn to love again one day
But now only to my destiny I obey.
Since I really wish you all the best
Just leave me all alone to get my rest."

Oh thanks adel,but i wish u dont think its very easy to move on,and if u deciding to move on,its not very easy to start life without a person u used to love :) believe me :D i m very experienced

Wow..
alot of passion shown
loved it 5/5

I love this poem its really good!