The poem was really great it rhymed at some words but in this poem it doesnt needs rhyming words , i thought it was really sweet ,loved the poem .keep writing

So sweet and very beautiful

"Your hands tell me when they grab mine.
Your sparkling soft brown eyes give it all away"

heart-felt) i love this poem!

Great job on this poem, so sweet :)

Omg, so cute!!! i loved it :-D

Wow this poem is really good and I really liked it.=)