Oh wow. i love it...every single part!!!!!!!!!!!!
5/5 forsure

Very sweet. I really like it. Awesome job. =]

Aww jeeze, the emotion in this is overwhelming. it makes my heart go pitter patter. The rhyme scheme is funky, like a a b a , c c c c , d e f g.

I love contrasting in the third stanza "softly" and tight" so that should DEFF stay the same, but the rest should somehow fit a different rhyme scheme

This is truly deeply touching and beautiful. The ending line is so effective it rounds up whole poem excellently. Fantastic, original love poem filled with greatly expressed emotions. I like every stanza and you managed to say so much in such short piece which is truly impressive.
The atmosphere that you created is remarkable.
Keep writing!

Beautiful!!

Wow,
that wuz great
i loved it
5/5
:]

Wow i liked this

Very tasteful man, yet gets the point across :) i dig this one man

Great poems... its so sexy and sensual... but at the same time... loving and careing... if you no wat i mean... yer

keep it up..
lol
baby

Very interesting, well penned and with just the right words to express the moment that played before us. well done

Aw!!.. this was great!. i like the rhyme scheme and how u set this poem to be.
good job
Aly

Wow, thats really emotional
i really like the word choice.
your very talented, keep it up =]

CodyJane

I really like your poetry, you have an amazing gift =]

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I really do love this poem! i give it a 5/5 all of the way! keep up the awesome work!

Nice.
Intresting
A different approch

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I love itt!!!! 5/5!! very very nice!

Sweet, I love how you could describe such emotion with so few words, very well writen, Beautiful :)

Haha such a lovely and vivid poem. I enjoyed this one of yours.=]

victoria