Wow! very interesting and thought provoking! a real good job i thought xx

Hey fren u rilli carved some very gewd lines n i rilli liked ya poem
its a heart touching one
gewd effort keep goin
luv ya

This was a very strong poem ... the emotion in it is great and i could almost hear the screams of Why... it was very amazing 5/5

Oh my...i loved this poem! It flows really good, and you use great words...5/5

Wow!! this poem was fantastic! it was beautiful in every way..a little sad too. either way i loved every word! had a wonderful flow and a perfect start and finish. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.