Comments : Standing and looking

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Please write me a comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Chris

    This is my favorite piece from what I've read of yours so far. At times I feel like I am who you speak of here. Keep writing! <---- always have to say that with my comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very sad poem. I really enjoyed the read. I like the way you have written this.

    So he ran away
    To the darkness and solitary that he deserves
    And now here I am standing and looking at the reflection of that man

    While reading you don't know it is a self reflection. Love the ending.
    great job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Saving Grace

    Loved this poem so much..its amazing! nice work :) keep it up