Comments : Sky high

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem is an exellent peice presenting ones private world, or so I understand it. All day long you are not yourself, you're something special that nobody unserstands. At night you finally can enjoy your own world and fly high. This poem's meaning is unique, as I didn't see many poems that relate to this topic. The flow here was amazing, so were the structure and rhyming. The choosing of words couldn't be better. Excellent job, keep it up 5/5