Comments : A Lonesome Heart Prayer

  • 16 years ago

    by Biya

    Good poem Nuwara ,
    'I raise my voice to the sky
    Hoping that god would hear my prayer '

    meanigful verse , God shall listen to you !
    BIYA

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Great way to describe how you want to escape !

    "Solitary fills my life with its tears and cries"
    very very good line i loved how this sounded!

    5/5 <33

  • 15 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    While I was reading that i felt like 'oh my God' that is just 2 heavenly :D, a very romantic, & soft way to describe this feeling of breaking away.

    "Help me escape and run away from this existence
    For all I want to do is race the stars to the moon"

    An amazing ending for an amazing poem, it just touched deep inside

  • 15 years ago

    by Erickson

    Very beautiful done. KEEP IT UP

  • 15 years ago

    by Erickson

    Very beautiful done. KEEP IT UP

  • 15 years ago

    by Erickson

    Very beautiful done. KEEP IT UP

  • 15 years ago

    by Erickson

    Very beautiful done. KEEP IT UP

  • 15 years ago

    by Heba

    OMG.What an amazing and touching piece.It is the same feeling that am going through,but am sure that god is going to make our life better.Insha'llah

    Well done.5\5...