Comments : When forever Ends

  • 16 years ago

    by Kate Hicks

    Great choice of phrases and analogies. It flows realy well. Great style. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Francis Vaska

    Very great understanding, very deep as well

  • 16 years ago

    by briana

    Wow amazing poems so much emotion great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Internal Hatred

    Amazing poem, I really liked it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Edward Latina

    This poem called on all the senses, drawing the reader into it with each blood-soaked word. Very intense and unforgiving, this poem is quite the exquisite peice.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Brilliant poem, I love it, it is so intense and imagery is totally vivid.
    You also have interesting choice of words, and I honestly enjoyed in every line.
    You wrote this with elegant darkness, very well done. Bravo!

  • I love it.
    The wording and rhyming were flawless.
    Good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Awww thats such a sad ending... luv the tittle

  • 16 years ago

    by sezz

    A really excellent poem, keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by meandhim080307

    That was amazing, very vivid, wonderful imagery. fantastic job. 5*5
    Kimberly

  • 16 years ago

    by Lemma

    Very creepy, love it. The ending was great and the "crawling through my skin" was really effective. Nice rhyme too. Wowee what a cool poem.

    5/5

    Em xXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Dang this is on a whole other level than what most people can understand and i mean me lol. It was deep but dang lol. Great job. 5/5
    -vino

  • 16 years ago

    by withlove

    Was readin through my comments n noticed u gave me a comment so i thought id return the favor
    i really like ur stuff ur a great writer
    especially this poem
    gud job and keep writing
    =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    That was good

  • 16 years ago

    by MEMI

    Wow

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Ooooh, excellent horror. A most enjoyable read.

  • 16 years ago

    by peter

    Have read it serveral times - loved it,
    It's worth editing to correct the punctuation,
    It will become Perfect.

  • 16 years ago

    by Goth marionette

    Stunning...from the title till the last letter of ur poem...I did like the way u wrote it..good job ,keep it up5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Hmm, Great meaning behind this poem. Tis very sad but yet it has a message in it that needs to be read. I loved this poem. Keep writting for you are a great poet. Never stop what you do.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Rain

    I like it, it's really good.