This is good..but i think it would be alot better if you seperated each line..and made it into two. still good though.5/5

Omg this is amazing!!!!!!!! i love it so much. definitly a 5, and going in my faves. u put so much emotion into this in such a beautiful way.

Aww what a tragic ending :| I have a suggestion in the title try changing the title or just remove the 'suicide' part so that when a reader reads this poem he/she won't expect the ending.

Anyway that's only a suggestion... I think the poem was great, it flowed nicely, good job.

5/5 from me :)