I would really appreciate it if you all comment/rate my poem "i look." its not one of my best poems, but i would lyke some feedback to know how i need to improve. i'll return the favor! i swear! love you all!

Hey i know you guyz hate this ... but could u please comment/rate some of my poems that i've written. i would really appreciate it and i will most definitly return the favor! love you all! ...alwayz -n- forever... ~heather noel~

I miss you
and i want you
i love you
and i need you

When you walk into a room ... you're all i see.

You make me feel beautiful.

When your holding me ... all my problems disappear

I never wanna leave you and i really do need you

I didn't know
What to do
Should I scream
Or let him take me
Take me to where
I didn't want to go

Its weird...but i cant stand the thought of being with anyone but him

I gotta let it go even though i can't live without u even though im missin everything about ya

-some song- some singer