I would really appreciate it if you all comment/rate my poem "i look." its not one of my best poems, but i would lyke some feedback to know how i need to improve. i'll return the favor! i swear! love you all!

You dont kno how much u mean to me whenver ur down u kno that u can lean on me

Hold You Down -- J.Lo and Fat Joe

I only think of u and its breaking my heart im trying to keep it 2gether but im falling apart

-we belong together- mariah carey

Gosh...guyz dont kno wut they want and when they figure it out its usually too late

You don't have to kno wut love is to fall in love.

You can't help who you love...
You're not supposed to.

Free me before i slip away
Heal me wake me from this day
Can somebody help me

**from a song**

**It's Hard To Answer The Question 'What's Wrong??' When Nothing Seems To Be Right**

Your hands
Are around my neck
The harder you squeeze
The more I forget
The love I
Once had for you

Hold me and I will touch you
Kiss me and I will taste you
Want me and I will need you