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What are these feelings
Of hate and pain
Taking over my life
Wondering if you still care

You make me sick!!!
How can you say all those things
Then go back to her!!!
It's just a great feeling being used!!!!!

And it kills me thinking of all those time we SHOULD HAVE HAD
Knowing that I could and should have had you
Knowing that she’ll never be good enough for you
But knowing that she’ll always be with you

As the rain violently pours down
And the heavens are screaming out
Sharp lightening bolts hit the ground
The thunders shouting loud

Its only a matter of time
Till this would will end
And all the pain within
Will come to it's bloody end...

Hate, anger, pain, hurt
Black, faithless, tired, broken...

What if i just happened to die
What if i killed myself tonight
Would you regret things you never said
Would you wish you had picked me instead

from my new poem 'regret'....

I know you can feel this undeniable love
Please come back to me, just one last hug
I have your heart as you have mine
Floating on clouds, as our souls entwine....

Please check out my new poem undeniable..id like to no wat u think!!thanx XOX

My heart turns cold
My skin turns pale
Rich red drips down the bloody floor
Which is how you left me with no hope at all.....

From my new poem...please comment/rate my stuff nd ill do the same!! XoX

There's just too many broken pieces to pick me up
Most of them dissapeared by the cause of love
It can be beautiful like a roses variety
Yet can be the cause of deaths anxiety...