Another stitch i sew, for every hurt you do...

Uhmmm..
im asking nicely..
could u read my poem and comment just a little?
just to know if i need to improve on my writing..
puhLeasseee!! (puppy eyes)..

Hey im bak!!! i already added new poems.,.,
i really need your help... can u comment on those again... it would really help me.,.,

tnx!! ...=^^,=...

=+~**f0rGiviNg u, d0esN't mEan im giVing u a 2nD cHaNce.,.,**~+=

=+~**i iMagine: mY pErfEct pArtNer tO wHispEr in mY eAr "i L0ve u" fOr eVery m0Rning i wAkE up.,.,**~+=

=+~**jUst teLL me tHat uR fiNe, thAt uR ok, thAt u can LaUgh..... thEn i cAn LeAvE wiTh a sMiLe**~+=

=+~**jUst teLL me tHat uR fiNe, thAt uR ok, thAt u can LaUgh..... thEn i cAn LeAvE wiTh a sMiLe**~+=

**~+=And wHen tHiS feeLing's g0ne.. c0nsidEr "f0rEvEr" hAs aLrEady eNdeD..=+~**

**~+=And wHen tHiS feeLing's g0ne.. c0nsidEr "f0rEvEr" hAs aLrEady eNdeD..=+~**

**~+=Ur LiKe mY bAgGaGe c0unTer,, i LeaVe t0 u mY hEaRt f0R u t0 hiDe, aNd i thinK i LoSt my cLaim cArd... n0w,, itS uRs t0 kEep=+~**