Hey im bak!!! i already added new poems.,.,
i really need your help... can u comment on those again... it would really help me.,.,

tnx!! ...=^^,=...

Uhmmm..
im asking nicely..
could u read my poem and comment just a little?
just to know if i need to improve on my writing..
puhLeasseee!! (puppy eyes)..

Another stitch i sew, for every hurt you do...

For every tear i cry, the cLoser i die...

U told me u missed me but u were looking at her... u told me u want me but u were holding her hands...
u told u me u love me but u were thinking of her...
so,, when u told me i was the one who do u mean???

me or her??? ='(

They say, everyday we learn something new...
indeed, i say its true,
for in this day i learned something new...
and that is to forget you...

**~+=And wHen tHiS feeLing's g0ne.. c0nsidEr "f0rEvEr" hAs aLrEady eNdeD..=+~**

**~+=And wHen tHiS feeLing's g0ne.. c0nsidEr "f0rEvEr" hAs aLrEady eNdeD..=+~**

=+~** y0u aRe tHe reAs0n mY eYes sWeLL, i gUess y0u neVeR knEw mE t0o weLL.,, **~+=

=+~** y0u aRe tHe reAs0n mY eYes sWeLL, i gUess y0u neVeR knEw mE t0o weLL.,, **~+=