"The Light In My Mind" 1/?

I've written a poem and would love some feedback...
If you r/r/c this poem, I'll comment and rate back honestly... for up to 3 of your poems. If I enjoy your poems... I'm might even r/r/c more! So, pick some good titles for me to read.

*One condition* To get your r/r/c's from me. You must post back in here, even if you don't care which 3 I do. :P

Done.

Please do my newest poem

"One More Time"
and
"Tell Me I'm Dreaming"
and
"Dear Sarah"

Its done!

just pls rrc my 3 newest

thanks and god bless

Done.
Could you please do ..
"It Reminds me of you"
"I Want You, I Need You, I Love You."
"Captured with a Smile; Left with a Tear"
Thanks :]