Sweet Surrender [[1 for 2]]

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    New Poem:
    "Sweet Surrender"

    I have recently revised one of my older pieces and I am in need of some feedback.
    Honestly comment and rate my newest poem and I will do the same for two of your poems.

    *leave me a one-liner
    expect nothing in return*

    thank you :]

  • Gasttlee
    17 years ago

    I loved it.
    Could you please do:
    "All Forgiven"
    and "Who Am I?".

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done :]

  • TheRapture03
    17 years ago

    Done. I really liked it.

    Could you do

    "Most Powerful Force in the World"
    The 2nd one I'll leave up to you.

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done :]

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Anyone else?

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done :)

    Please r/r/c: "Bleeding Heart"

    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=996016

    Thanks in advance!

  • BeautifulxMess
    17 years ago

    Done *
    Please do:
    -Homecoming Queen
    -The Biggest Fear

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done :]

  • Melpomene
    17 years ago

    Will do =]

    Any of my latest would be much appreciated.

    Thankyou!

    ~Mel

  • Stephanie
    17 years ago

    Of course I'll do it. :]]

    Any of my latest please.
    Thankss a bunch. (:

    -- Steph.

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done SlaveToTheMusic :]

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done stephanie :]