Deal...or No Deal....?

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    Hey peeps! How's it goin? Okay, so i've been on this little writing streek and was wonderin if you guys could comment on some of my latest poems. I will return double of what you do!

    *Note: Most of my new poems are love poems, so if you don't like love poems.. im sorry! but maybe i can change you mind *mwhahaha* lol or you can even check out some of my older ones that aren't love poems.. whatever works for yah! thanks!!! ;]

    HiiSXBaBY-Done
    AblissfulDREAMER-Done
    NyellMoonlight-Done
    coolest loser ever- Done
    FridusBlueheaven-Done
    Nici-Done
    Siro is Procrastinating-Done
    The Jack of Hearts- Done
    Cayce-Done

  • BeautifulxMess
    17 years ago

    Please just do
    -The Biggest Fear.
    and another that catches your eye :)
    I'll get right on to your poems :)
    **Done :)

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done.
    Could you please do ...
    "Sweet Surrender"
    "Wonderful Tonight"
    thanks :]

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done :) I did "I'm Fragile, Please Handle Me With Care" & "Here's My Heart"

    Please do:

    * Platinum Perfection (Nonet)
    * Devotion to Soles of Happiness
    * Teardrops on my Guitar
    * Through the Fire and Flames

    Thanks in advance!

  • XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX
    17 years ago

    I did two of yours. they were great. please do "suicide note" "her wish" "you are there" and "loves war" thank you soo much!!

  • FridusBlueheaven
    17 years ago

    Done with two of yours, very beautiful poems. Thanks for sharing!!!

    Please pick what you want to do from these:
    Behind The Waterfall
    Under The Radar
    The Smile Of A Brokenhearted Man
    Give Me Tonight
    Butterfly
    Angel Of My Night
    Bucket Of Flowers

    Thanks a bunch

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    All done! anybody else wanna go at this???

  • Nici
    17 years ago

    I'll have a look at some of your work would be grateful if you could read some of mine.

    Nici

  • TheRapture03
    17 years ago

    Done. Good job btw.

    Could you do

    Most Powerful Force in the World
    The Ballad on an Angel
    As the Sands of Time Flow

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    All done.. very great job to all of you by the way! some really talented people out there! keep on writing!

    anybody else wanna take the deal???

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    I did two. They were amazing.

    You can do any of mine.

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    Great job cayce!!!!!!! anybody else?

  • JustKristina
    17 years ago

    Cummon don't be afraid, i don't bite *cough* hard *cough* *cough* lol :]