A kind of Unlimited Offer

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    17 years ago

    Hey guys,

    So this semester I have 5 classes and no lunch, and am preparing for my auditions into university! I love commenting/rating poems but I have less time then I did last semester. I have wrote a new poem for my boyfriend for Valentines and would love comments advice to make it better and such! I will definitely read 2 of your poems if you can rate and comment this poem! If I find myself with time on my hands then I will always open up this post and read more of your poems! Basically an unlimited offer! I will also add you to my favorites!!! I would really love the help so much!

    "A Delicate Rose"

    Alexandra

  • TheRapture03
    17 years ago

    Done. good job, btw

    Could you do

    The 'Ballad of an Angel', and any other one you'd like

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done! :]

    Just read any of my newest ones! Thanks!

    Caye xx