Haiku

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    I've written a haiku called "Lost Heaven". It's the first time I've ever written one. I was hoping you could well first tell me if I even did it right and second if it was any good.

    This is a one for two deal!

    Oh yeah, make sure you rate!

    Thanksss. :]

    Edit: This Haiku go turned into a Senryu! Haha.

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  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done! :] Great poems.

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  • XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX
    17 years ago

    I did it. it was amazing!! do any two u feel like reading.

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  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done. Great poem :)

    Please do:

    * Carnal Sophistication
    * Winged Farewell (Sedoka)

    Thanks.

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  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done. :]]

    Great job you guys! Loved the poems!

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  • Crystal Gaze
    17 years ago

    Done:)
    Could you do my latest two.
    Thanks, aswell please vote.
    --Elaine.

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  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    Done.
    Could you please do my latest two?
    thanks :]

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  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done. :]] Loved the poems (and short story) you guys!

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