My Own Valentine's Day!

Heeeey friends... umm will i need some help again... the thing is this year's Valentine is the worst i've ever had because my love is sorta away from me .. so i wrote her this poem. ( My Own Valentine's Day )
So please give me some feedback and tell me what you really think of it.
thanks alot ... Loveeeee ya allll!!!

here is the link:

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/special/poems.php?id=1002691