I want to comment

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Hey,

    I want to comment some poems so if you have any that you want me to take a look at leave me a link or just the name of the poem you want me to look at and I will =)

    Might be nice if you had a look at one of mine but that's not why I'm posting, so yeah, poems to comment please =)

    Em xXx

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    PS I don't leave one-liners. Sometimes you can't get me to shut up!

    And if I leave criticism, I always try to be constructive!

  • Michelle18
    17 years ago

    Can you please do...

    * he was sent up in the sky
    *crimson red

    thanx im commenting peoples poems that owe ..when im done i will look at some of yours.

  • TheRapture03
    17 years ago

    Wow thanks.

    could you do

    Heaven's Shining Door
    The Ballad of an Angel (Lovely Lilttle Angel)
    Today, You Went Away (I'm Sorry)

  • FlawlesslyTarnished
    17 years ago

    Could you please do.
    -Her Cliche Tragedies.
    and/or anything from my featured list
    that catches your eye.

    please and thankyou. :]

    [im gonna go look at some of yours now]

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    I've already read Her cliche tragedies but I'll certainly go and read some others. Great! I'll get started on these right away =)

    xXx

  • Blissful
    17 years ago

    "A Distant Whisper in the Wind"
    thanks :]

  • FlawlesslyTarnished
    17 years ago

    So oh em gee.
    amazing. :]

    [just wanted to say that] :D

  • Morgan
    17 years ago

    Um can you r/r/c on these two on my featured page?
    ~"Done"
    ~"True Friend"
    <3 thanx!

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Done all of these so I'm off to bed now, will comment any more tomorrow, I look forward to reading them!

    Thanks to everyone who's left me comments =)

    xXx

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Have done =)

    Any more for any more?

    xXx

  • Not
    17 years ago

    Ok i'll do it!!..=]

    can you do my poem Dead Woman
    please and thank you!!

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Done diddly un done.

    Woo! I'm on a roll!

    I think I've had too much sugar =S

    xXx

  • Stephanie
    17 years ago

    Could you please do:

    Hanging Onto Catastrophe
    &
    Concentrate On Escaping This Town.

    Thankks A Bunch! (:
    - Steph.

  • Stephanie
    17 years ago

    Thanks for the advice. :]
    It actually helped me quite a bit.

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Yay! No probs =) Really enjoyed reading them.

    Em xXx

  • Poet on the Piano
    17 years ago

    Hi!!! Could you please comment on my three poems "Give Me Tonight", "In Your Time", and "A Dreamland of Beauty" Thanks So Much!!!!!

  • Poet on the Piano
    17 years ago

    Thanks so much, it really meant a lot to me!!! Keep writing and Happy Valentine's Day!!!!!

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    You are most welcome =)

    Happy Valentines day,

    Em xXx