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  • Nelle
    17 years ago

    I've got two new poems.
    I have a couple more, but they won't be posted until later. I really want honest criticism, so anyone who r/r/c them I will do three for you. Thank you!

    oh and they are called
    Going home
    Heartbreak

  • Gasttlee
    17 years ago

    I did them and I must say they were beautiful.
    For me could you do:

    "Valentine's Day",
    "All The Difference"
    and "Family".

  • Nelle
    17 years ago

    Thank you =)
    and i did them.

    Anyone else?

  • StonedGooberz
    17 years ago

    Yea i got those to done, btw i love the way you rhyme things. other then that feel free to look at any of the ones you want.

    - Raindrops

  • Nelle
    17 years ago

    Did them. They were absolutely adorable.

    Anyone else? Come on people I NEEED comments =]