Nickelback Poem Contest!!!

  • Victoria Rainey
    16 years ago

    HEY! My favorite music group is the Nickelback .. so I put down their titles.. so just select one that you would like to write a poem about .. and I will judge and select a winner.. and the winner(s) will recieve a Bigggggg prizze.. the dead line is sunday the 2nd only one poet per title.. must reserve please..

    1 Animals- GothicVampyress
    2 Far Away (Available)
    3 Fight For All The Wrong Reasons- Britt
    4 Follow You Home- (Available)
    5 If Everyone Cared- mOnStRiToS
    6 Next Contestant- Jade
    7 Photograph- Polaroid
    8 Rockstar- Beautiful_Chaos
    9 Savin' Me (Available)
    10 Side Of A Bullet (Available)
    11 Someone That You're With- Ashes of Black Roses

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    Rockstar

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    "If Everyone Cared" please.

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    16 years ago

    I'll take "someone that you're with." can it bee an old poem? b/c that poem is actually and literally inspired by that song. if not, i'll take "all the wrong reasons."

  • Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child
    16 years ago

    If i can do the old one, here it is:

    someone that you're with

    You're just the salt in the wound of my broken heart
    You're just a mass of confusion getting ready to start
    You're an ongoing battle of a war already won
    You're the loaded silver bullet in my suicide gun
    And I'll say "I love you" once again...

    You used to be my one and only
    But now I'm here broken and lonely
    While you're hanging out with someone else...
    Toss me aside and tear me open
    Stole my heart and now it's broken
    As I watch you kiss somebody else...

    You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
    And I take it you don't want me back again

    You're the poison in my white wine
    You're the first star in night's shine
    You're the black hole in the back of my mind
    You're what I lost and just can't find
    And I' m willing to love you again...

    You're the one I loved for a million reasons
    You're the one I need like breathing
    But I see you looking in the eyes of someone else...
    You're making my life miserable
    But you're just so irresistible
    But still I cannot be that someone else...

    You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
    And I take it you don't want to hear my voice again

    You're in love and I can't take it
    And if you're not you sure can fake it
    I see you holding hands with someone else...
    I'm holding your valentine
    Which is asking you to please be mine
    Your face frowns 'cause I'm not your someone else...

    My roses fall to the floor
    I know you don't care anymore
    Why can't I still be that someone else?
    I make a beeline for the door
    As you pick up the roses from the floor
    I used to be that someone else...

    You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
    And I take it you've denied me once again

    You're the poison in my white wine
    As I'm begging you to be mine
    You're the thing I lost and can't get it back
    I close my eyes and it fades to black
    And I'll say "I love you" once again...

    My heart broke and you're the salt in the wound
    By my own love I am entombed
    And if this is just a game I guess you've won
    'cause you are the loaded silver bullet in my suicide gun
    and I'd tell you it again...

    You're the one I want to be with but you're with somebody else
    And I take it you won't think my name again

    You're everything that I desire
    You're everything that I admire
    Even though i know there's someone else...
    Baby please accept this rose,
    And then I'll let love's curtain close,
    God, Why can't I still be that someone else?

  • Polaroid
    16 years ago

    I'll take.... hmm its between photograph and far away.... I'll take photograph thanks
    polaroid

  • Polaroid
    16 years ago

    PHOTOGRAPH

    The luminescent glow of candle light.
    The aura it puts upon my oaken desk.
    All thats in my hands, a faded photograph, a sight.
    Tears just held back, but only with all my might.

    Long ago, the event occurred, but never a day goes by.
    When my mind doesn't wander to think of him.
    And always do I let out a sigh.
    For the one I love, who let me down with one simple lie.

    How could I trust him, that much I thought.
    I didn't give him the second chance he deserved.
    And now the sun has set, no time left, he never sought,
    He let me be. And I didn't see we were BOTH distraught.

    I didn't choose to see the love we had.
    I blew the only true chance I'd have at happiness.
    and now all I have is a memory, so sad.
    of the one true love I'll ever have.

    polaroid

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    16 years ago

    Next Contestant

  • RobinAnn13
    16 years ago

    I'll take Animals...thanks! ^.^

  • Victoria Rainey
    16 years ago

    Ashes of the Black roses... yes u may use the old poem if ull like...

    BTW.... THE DEADLINE IS TMWWW!!

  • SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA
    16 years ago

    OMG, I forgot about this. Can I still get my poem in?

  • Beautiful Chaos
    16 years ago

    Rockstar

    Liquid screams
    And cocaine dreams
    Dripping down the road

    A slippery slope
    So hard to cope
    They try to bear the load

    Cameras flashing
    Cars are crashing
    Brilliant burning stars

    Always falling
    Time recalling
    Picking at the scars

    Money madness
    Lonely sadness
    False friends dig your sound

    When music's gone
    And life moves on
    Will they still be around

    Rockstar dreams
    The poet screams
    Released into the night

    Singe the stage
    Such praise and rage
    Dive into delight

  • Alexandra Jade Brewer
    16 years ago

    Next Contestant

    What is this, some game?
    To see who can last longer
    Because I'm not in it to win
    I know your stronger

    You will always devour me
    Make me feel smaller
    Tear down my walls, make me weak
    Can anyone hear me shout scream and holler

    Nothing will ever change
    You and I will always clash
    The bull and the ram head on head
    Till one makes there final dash

    The dash will be brutal
    But because I am weaker
    Verbally, physically, and emotionally
    You will be the last speaker

    As I sit broken from defeat
    Listen to my last word
    Go find your next contestant
    I give up on being heard.

  • Brittany C
    16 years ago

    Never mind

  • Cooper
    16 years ago

    I'll take "Saving Me", please.

  • Dan
    16 years ago

    Well its not THE nickelback its just nickelback, but ill take "savin me" plz

  • Dan
    16 years ago

    Savin' Me

    Life's so hard to take my goal
    These iron bars they hold me so
    And I can't reach for you
    The sand of time, they box me in
    Like daggers cutting at my skin
    And through it all is you
    All I see is blood and pain
    And the cold steel rings into my brain
    And all I see is you
    The box I'm in cant hold my soul
    But all I see are 4 tall walls
    And in the dark I feel so cold
    And in my mind is you
    I see myself beside you, close
    Into the twilight I must escape
    Coz' all I want is you
    And all I need is you

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    Its simple, i based it on the song abit too so i hope you enjoy, and to that bastard who said he wanted this title above me, i wrote my poem first so :P

  • Dan
    16 years ago

    Is any1 gunna judge this?