"Deceive" -- for those who can comprehend poetry 1/3

I wrote a poem called, "Deceive" ... and yes, it is backwards! For those of you who understand it... good job and I'll give you a 3 r/r/c's in return.

But never fear! For those of you who don't get it, I've reversed the poem into simple terms.

RULES:
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Other:
Its a little confusing, but still decent. Hope you enjoy it :)

Done.

Please r.r.c my latest poem

"Taken from the mind of a prostitute"

and any other 2 of your choice. thank you!

Done:)
could you please r/r/c
"the love, the past, the memories"
"november rain"
and 1 on your choice
thank u in advance

Waw so nice, 5/5
if u got time r/r/c any two of my latest

Done :P

Done. Please do:

If I Were Dying
Just Like You
Method in the Madness

Thanks =]

The way you wrote that was incredible. Please r/r/c any of mine. Your choice Thank You!

Done :P Great poems btw...

More :P

Done.

Great write!

I loved both versions.

xLaurenx

Sociopathic xLolax done :P good poems!