Dark poem "Death" <-- speaks for itself 1/3 :P

Wrote a poem called "Death" and would like some feedback... I'll r/r/c 3 of yours if you r/r/c this one.

RULES:
Must comment back here to receive credit.

Other:
Please don't leave 1 liners... you can but I would like an actual review please.
I'll love you if you do this :)

I commented it please comment any of mine that are uncommented

I r/r/c'd it, please r/r/c:
Submission

and 2 others of my poems that catch your eye.

Very nice write btw!
Thanks in advance!
~gabriella

[Also, please leave honest comments, they would be very much appreciated]

Commented.
good work

can you please do
am i pretty enough now
and pretty ugly.

thakies...

sarah

Done.

I've only got three poems, so it shouldn't be hard to pick them. =]

Done r/r/c-ing great poems btw :P