"Falling Away" -- 1/3 + Bonus

Hey all... I wrote this poem and I really didn't think I was gonna request to have it read. But I noticed it got nominated for the weekly contest so I figure it's decent.

So if you would please r/r/c this I'll do 3 for you!

Plot:
A teenage boy in his room who loses his family to a suicidal homicide.

Rules:
Must comment back here to receive credit :P

Bonus:
If you critique the poem, I will praise your comment.

(Comments go through the moderators and unless you critique it, they won't accept the praise -- comments that are made to flatter the poet aren't accepted)

Other:
I hope you all enjoy :)!

I will.

Great poems as always! :) Thanks for the r/r/c!

Thank you too :]