So,Here'sTheDeal..[greatdeal.]

--CLOSED//DONE--
Thanks to everyone! xD

I'm in the mood to read some poetry. But, no one's responding to my last few threads - farily, that is. I prefer prose, so if you have those, set me loose. But, of course, poetry is fine.
So, I've decided on this.

DEAL---
You give me one to three poems (only!) that you want highly critiqued. This means I can say exactly what I want about everything I want. Some will be excellent critiques, some will be bad. But, if you want an honest opinion, leave me titles.

SO.
RULES--
o1. You must do three of my poems, in return, since it'll take me time to do yours, and you're not even going into detail like I will be (though you can if you want). :].
o2. No one-liners, however. I will NOT return the favor if you leave one liners.
o3. Must vote AND comment.
o4. Tell me what you really think.
o5. I'll nominate any comments/poems I see worthy of nomination. If I get enough, it'll probably happen at least once, but it's hard.
o6. Enjoy yourself.

MY POEMS--
o1. Of Tongues Swollen with Lies.
o2. Forseeen and Fragmented
o3. Like A Fever So Close to Bone [2]

Or, any others with few or no comments.
Just pick your favorite title, if you want.

ALRIGHT.
GOOOO.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex.

Okay , I will do this . And like you I leave very , strict and detailed comments . It may take me some time , but I will do all three . Or how about I start out with one for right now and work on the others as it goes . Lol . Please do any of my most recent . Thanks ahead of time :]]

Amber .

Your a brilliant writer

please do
Obscurity is my Light Switch, Love is my Crucifix
and
Tuesday's Coming, Did You Bring Your Jacket?

thankx in advance

James--
What might you be talking about?
And if you <were> in one of my old threads,
you were probably one of the greedy ones I was talking about.
So.

Knee Deep In Emotions--
Take your time. I appreciate that you're doing this for me. :]. And like you, this may take me awhile, but as long as I get worthy comments back, I'll certainly do them. xox.

And... I'll do yours as soon as you do mine. Hope that sounds fair. :].

Anthony Doubal--
Wow.
Thank you for such a blunt comment. :]. You make me smile. Lol.

I've finished both of yours (I think, make sure) and I want to thank you again for your time. :].
xox.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Done. :] They were all amazing, as usual.

Hmm, which poems of mine are not completely and totally horrible.. How about:

-=-Life-long Facade
-=-Seventeen Years of Rage
-=-A Contradicting Life

Thanks Sheena! :]

I just got done with the first one :]]
Sorry it is so long . Lol .
I will get on the next one asap .

Amber .

James--
You just don't stop, do you?
Good god, grow up, Darling.

I haven't had any comments from you, which equals (to be fair here) no comments from you.
Show me the comments and I'll give you yours.
If you did comment, they didn't register, because I've checked a fair amount of poems for comments from you.
Now kindly
stop downvoting my poems because you're greedy
and get a life.
Thanks.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Cayce--
Done. =].

Knee Deep in Emotions--
Keep trudging, Babe! The longer you take, the easier it is on me.
I have a lot of comments to do from other posts, and I seem to be doing really long comments lately.. Sooo, it takes me awhile.
So, keep it up and I'll get yours done when you finish mine. =] Sound good?

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Hey read my poem tell me what yout think of it and also.. "Dusk Till Dawn" "Sitting Scared"

Alvaro--
Could you uphold the deal and give me a thought out comment on three of my poems? That was the deal, Gorgeous. :].

If you do, I'll be glad to do yours.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

Ahh of course wouldnt think twice about it

Knee Deep in Emotion --
On Hold. You're finishing my comments. =].
---
Alvaro --
I'm heading to see the comments you left me.
Thanks for being so kind.

However, I must complain.. Can you please leave three titles? I'll just pick the first three if you don't...
Give me your best? =].

----
"lol i was looking to find a flaw.. just one.. but no.. maybe i just fell into your words great piece"
^^^
Wow. I love you. Can I put you in a bottle and keep you with me forever. o.O.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex

A world i want
Disease
(Replaced) or (Dusk till Dawn)