Nature Poem: "Waiting For the Sun" -- 1/3

  • Beautiful Forever
    17 years ago

    I wrote this poem ... kinda different from my normal styles of writing. I would love to know how you think it turned out... r/r/c this and I'll do 3 of yours.

    Plot:
    The world renewing after a storm that had raged for centuries.

    Rules:
    Must comment back here to receive credit.

    Other:
    Thank you for reading :)

  • Anthony Duvalle
    17 years ago

    There you go:D

    tht wuz an excellent piece

    do wichever of mine you feel

  • Robie Lincer
    17 years ago

    Done... :)

  • Robert
    17 years ago

    Please comment and rate the following poems

    To Know You
    Those We Trust
    To My Teacher

  • Robert
    17 years ago

    It was a very tender poem that held my attention toenjoy the thought of sunrises great work Plot121