Phantom Gazes [One for Two)

I don't like my most recent poems, but I need to do SOMETHiNG to get my mind off of what's been torturing my life, so, if you would do :

`Phantom Gazes
`Faint Ruminations

If you do both, I will do Three of yours.
--No One-Liners (That includes pointless, unconstructive criticism that last like, five lines)
`I will not reply if you do this.
--Please Vote
`If you don't, I will not on yours.
--Leave Titles . If you don't care what poems I do, tell me or else I just won't do any of your poems at all.
--No Nature Poems, please. I most definitely cannot pay attention while reading those.

Thanks, dearies.
--..MiNDYY

I will be sure to check them out for you. and i dont mind what ones of mine you do.

Done, i did both of them

Done .
Anyone else?

I'll do them.

It may take me a little while because they will be quite long.

I don't care which of mine you do.

Thankyou.

Done. Your really a good writer with great potential I just think you should read back over your writings once or twice before you post them to look for things that mess up the flow or are unnecessary

other than that you did very well

I don't mind which of mine you do

Thankx in advance

_Anthony_

Done.

Just do my two latest. I don't remember what I named them. R/R/C'ing yours now.

--Edit;
I have one more to do for Anthony, and I still have SlaveToMusic's poems to do. I'll get to them but for now, I need to go calm myself.

Thank you all for the honest comments -- I know it's not my best work by far, and your criticism helps. I'll comment all of you within the next few days -- I thought I'd have more time so I could comment back, but unexpected things just came and smacked me in the face, so I'm really sorry =__=

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