One for Two . Two for Three .

Do my latest --
`A Painter's Masterpiece
And/or an old one --
`Faint Ruminations

My latest is quite rough, not my best, I know -- but again, I need something to do to take the stress and anger off my mind.

`No one liners (that includes five lines of pointless, meaningless junk, too).
`Honest, helpful critiques +or meaningful comments. Anything less, and what you give is what you get.
`Please vote . If you vote low, explain so I may improve.
`Leave titles -- if you don't, I don't comment. Unless you don't care what poems I do, then let me know that or else I still won't comment.
`No nature poems, please. I've only read about five good ones -- so usually, they bore me to death.
`Don't expect me to finish commenting back immediately. I have a ton of tests this week and projects -- so chill .

Thanks, dearies.
..__MiNDYY

Okay done,nice work
so can you do 2 of my latest poem:
a dream about you
i cant live without you
thanks

Done .
Anyone elsee ?

I commented and voted. You can comment and vote my two poems, "The Real Thing" and "Whisper". Thanks!

Yeah if you can rate and comment

distance
dusk till dawn

Done .
Who's next ? :D