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  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    So the last time I did a 1 for 5 but since I leave really detailed honest comments. It took me FOREVER, I've still got a few left, but I'm almost finished. So, I'm only doing a 1 for 1 this time. I hope that's okay. :]

    I wrote this really personal prose called Shh, Little One, It's okay. It would be great if you'd comment it and tell me what you think. I'm kind of self concious about it, because I've never really written something like that. Usually, I just write fiction.

    Rules:
    1. Must rate.
    2. No one liners.
    3. Please no love poems, I really don't enjoy reading them.

    Okay, that's about it.

    Thank you! :]]

  • Normal is the Watchword
    17 years ago

    I reccommend this post only if you do want honest comments, I like how Cayce actually gives you an opinion so please be nice and give her the same back!

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    Done :) Great write.

    Please comment/rate "Thousand Burned Down Yesterdays"

    Thanks.

  • jojo
    17 years ago

    I wrote a comment on another piece b/c i had alrdy done the one you suggested so please i would suggest a love poem but i know how you feel bout those so try "The Locket of Elizibeth Pue" I wrote it a while ago but i think you might enjoy it if you like fiction!

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done. :]

    Anyone else?

  • Cale
    17 years ago

    Yeah read and comment and rate mine called shadow of life.

  • BlueEyedMystery
    17 years ago

    Done. :]

    Anyone else?

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    Done .
    Could you please do :

    `A Painter's Masterpiece

    Thanks, dear .
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Alvaro
    17 years ago

    "Lovers escape" if you can