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  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Take A Bow (Now It's All Over) (Worth Four Comments)
    http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=1007639

    I Still Know The Way To Make Your Makeup Run )Worth Four Comments)
    http://www.friendship-poems.com/poems.php?id=996290

    Dying To Feel Again (Worth Three Comments)
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1020685

    Don't Waste My Time (Worth Three Comments)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=982006

    Have I Told You LLately That I Loathe You? (Worth Three Comments)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=982012

    They Brought Him Home In A Bodybag (Worth Two Comments)
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=982002

    Tape Them Shut (Worth Two Comments)
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=982004

    Congratulations, I Hate You (Worth Two Comments)
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1007638

    Ana...You Lose (Worth Two Comments)
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1002967

    If you comment all of the above, I will comment 25 of your poems.

    HOWEVER. Do not leave me a one liner. Leave me a one liner and I will disregard all of your work.
    Don't know what to say? Here's a hint-tell me what you liked and disliked and, what you thought could be better and how to improve.
    It's called constructive critscim (sp) I can handle it, so be honest. Be harsh!

    Leave titles or links or I wont do them.

    Now please keep in mind I am very busy right now, but your comments will get returned. Just, be patient with me okay =D

    Have a nice day.
    xx

    Comments Owed:

    Alvaro
    i love you..
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=991286
    replaced
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=972930
    a world i want
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=936199
    choose the door
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=886737
    disease
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=847553
    new story
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=843131

    Engel Augen
    Its over
    Prince charming is gone
    In pursuit of happiness
    Drowning
    Torn to pieces
    Shattered within
    He lives in you
    Right decision
    Forever
    Two faces
    Hidden within
    Eaten alive
    Living a lie
    Yearning
    Badly violated
    Forgotten love
    The gambler
    Something God can't do
    Pierced heart
    Why?
    The cloud
    Incredible scenery
    Only you
    The whisper
    In my eyes

    Vulgar Sympathy
    I Can't Breathe. No, I Really Can't.
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1017885
    The Truth Was Embedded In Our Lies.
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1012407
    You're A Misconception Made With All The Right Intentions.
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1011539

    KindlyUnspoken
    Silver Lining Laid Bare
    `The Tree and I
    `The River
    `Strangers on a Train

    kelly tavern
    Spirits
    Time
    mid winter flower
    nightmare
    tears
    how does it feel

    fire lilies
    Seductress
    True Love
    Angel Eyes
    The storm
    Once
    Beauty of Nature
    You Stole My Heart
    Always Yours
    His Touch
    In The Back of His Truck
    Sleep
    Questions 2
    Shooting Star
    With Out You
    Summer Sun
    Promises
    Confussed Little Heart
    Love's Desire
    Questions
    A Perfact Day
    My True Love
    Never Ending Pain
    Time Passes By
    Caught In The Past
    and
    Dragon

    Vanessa
    This KInd Of Life
    Crimson Tide
    Another Twisted Joke
    Why didn't you listen
    Addiction
    Torn Apart
    Abruptly Torn
    HOw it goes
    Life isn't the same
    The End
    Quest for Imortality
    Blazing Mary Jane
    What you asked for
    Abused child
    Abusaed child 2
    abused child 3
    Broken Marriage
    The scent of Sex and sweat
    LIving Dead
    Without you
    Dragon fairies little green men
    Unheard
    LIving in fear
    My life
    No more drinking

    Michael D Nalley
    Judas was a junkie (2)
    by Michael D Nalley
    Kindness can be Contagious (4)
    by Michael D Nalley
    Leaving a Mark (2)
    by Michael D Nalley
    Love the Sinner
    Running from the Sun (1
    Striptease
    Do you want to make love?
    What is it that you want from me? (1)
    votes: 1
    BALANCE (0)
    Let Our Conscience Be Our Guide (3)
    Discouragement to Encouragement (
    Aching for a Break
    I want to get close to you (3)
    The Last Rose (1
    Valentine Memory (
    Master or Slave? (
    I wasn't thinking (
    The Best from the Past (
    Heavenly Shelter (
    Resolution to My Life (
    Back from Iraq

    The Sky is Falling-
    Senses
    Schools out Forever
    Haters
    Unknow lost
    Fear
    Pale Angel
    I don't know
    Bad Dreams
    Pale Angel
    Death on Christmas
    Broken Soul
    Failed Me
    Real Dreams
    Lost Life never new
    A silent lie changing my life.

    Consumed in Happiness
    Don't Let Heart Break Control You
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=1027456

    A Tale Of Fate
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1024828

    Heart Broken
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1022851

    Her Grandpa
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=965855

    His Suicide
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=962966

    Anorexia
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=962965

    New Girl
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=967009

    A Five Year Old's Story
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=972830

    The Joy Of My Life
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=974399

    Just Another Masquarade
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=974398

    The Secrets of the "Diet"
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/dark/poems.php?id=1029473

    Sadness
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1029468

    Trapped
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=956946

    Horrible Day
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=956944

    The Results of Your Decision
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1022853

    Jaymes Haze
    All poems

    Joe-
    Far Away, Miles Apart (Collab)
    Perfect Harmony (Collab)
    Heaven Needed a Hero (Collab)
    In Sorrow For Eternity
    It Isn't Much (Collab)
    Written With Emotions
    My Tears Shall Awaken You
    Flirtatious (Alphabet poem)
    My Heart I Give To You (Collab)
    Now And Then (Collab)
    Christmas In Heaven
    Passion within
    The Photo of You
    Starlight Night (Reprise)
    Suddenly everything has changed (collab)
    If you were...
    Loving You (Part 1)
    Loving You (Part 2)
    Loving You (Part 3)

    xMummys little Monsterx-
    1. Am i pretty enough now
    2. Pretty Ugly
    3. Rejected by the world
    4. isnt it stupid
    5. Accidental
    6. Something she forgot to mention
    7. Drunk drivers
    &&
    8. Unpretty

    Robert
    Featured poems

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    I did "I Still Know The Way To Make Your Makeup Run."
    Could you please do :

    `A Painter's Masterpiece
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1020040

    `Faint Ruminations
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=978891

    `Born to Adore; three stages.
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=979291

    `Breathe
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=854931

    Thanks, dearest.
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Alvaro
    17 years ago

    Hey just a 9 for 10 id like the 10 to be the 10 featured poems i have

    lovers escape
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1019621

    sitting scared
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1019565

    dusk till dawn
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1018925

    distance
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1012144

    i love you..
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=991286

    replaced
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=972930

    a world i want
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=936199

    choose the door
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/life/poems.php?id=886737

    disease
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=847553

    new story
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=843131

  • Stephanie
    17 years ago

    I'll do: Have I Told You Lately That I Loathe You?

    Could you please do::

    I Can't Breathe. No, I Really Can't.
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1017885

    The Truth Was Embedded In Our Lies.
    http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/sad/poems.php?id=1012407

    and

    You're A Misconception Made With All The Right Intentions.
    http://www.best-love-poems.com/poems.php?id=1011539

    Thankss. :]
    - Steph. x

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Thanks guys ^^

    I will have these done over the next few days.
    xx

  • dollwithafrown
    17 years ago

    I did "Take A Bow (Now It's All Over)".

    Could you please do:

    `Silver Lining Laid Bare
    `The Tree and I
    `The River
    `Strangers on a Train

    Thank you. :)

  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    I am very impressed and will read, comment and vote on nine

  • Quietly Versed
    17 years ago

    I have given very thoughtful comments.

  • kelly tavern
    17 years ago

    Hi I R/r/c on these :-

    Take a bow ( now its all over )
    Don't waste my time
    Dying to feel again
    I still know the way to make your make up run

    Could you plz R/r/c on these for m :-

    Spirits
    Time
    mid winter flower
    nightmare
    tears
    how does it feel

    Many thanks x
    Take care

  • Brittany C
    17 years ago

    Done I rated and commented on all 9
    please do

    Seductress
    True Love
    Angel Eyes
    The storm
    Once
    Beauty of Nature
    You Stole My Heart
    Always Yours
    His Touch
    In The Back of His Truck
    Sleep
    Questions 2
    Shooting Star
    With Out You
    Summer Sun
    Promises
    Confussed Little Heart
    Love's Desire
    Questions
    A Perfact Day
    My True Love
    Never Ending Pain
    Time Passes By
    Caught In The Past
    and
    Dragon

    Thanks :-)

    sorry about all of the love poems

  • Vanessa
    17 years ago

    I read all 9 poems, although i started out doing it for the comments I keept doing because the poems were excellent. Your very talented and I caouldn't find anything harsh to say about any of them, but i assure that everything I said was in honesty.
    Could you please do the following when you get the chance, no hurry.
    This KInd Of Life
    Crimson Tide
    Another Twisted Joke
    Why didn't you listen
    Addiction
    Torn Apart
    Abruptly Torn
    HOw it goes
    Life isn't the same
    The End
    Quest for Imortality
    Blazing Mary Jane
    What you asked for
    Abused child
    Abusaed child 2
    abused child 3
    Broken Marriage
    The scent of Sex and sweat
    LIving Dead
    Without you
    Dragon fairies little green men
    Unheard
    LIving in fear
    My life
    No more drinking
    Thanks in advance
    Please remember to vote, and I like honesty too

  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    Judas was a junkie (2)
    by Michael D Nalley
    Kindness can be Contagious (4)
    by Michael D Nalley
    Leaving a Mark (2)
    by Michael D Nalley
    Love the Sinner
    Running from the Sun (1
    Striptease
    Do you want to make love?
    What is it that you want from me? (1)
    votes: 1
    BALANCE (0)
    Let Our Conscience Be Our Guide (3)

    Discouragement to Encouragement (
    Aching for a Break
    I want to get close to you (3)
    The Last Rose (1
    Valentine Memory (
    Master or Slave? (
    I wasn't thinking (
    The Best from the Past (
    Heavenly Shelter (
    Resolution to My Life (

    Back from Iraq

  • NyellMoonlight
    17 years ago

    I did "Take A Bow (Now It's All Over)". Truly great read.
    I'll maybe r/r/c some more when I have time.
    For now, you can do:

    * When Words Kill
    * I Climb, I Slip, I Fall Reaching For Your Hands
    * Thousand Burned Down Yesterdays
    * Eat Your Heart Out

    Thanks in advance :)

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    I'll do it, but is there another poem you'd like me to do in place of "Take A Bow (Now It's All Over)" since I've already done that one.

  • Jenni Marie
    17 years ago

    Joe-any others are fine :) i will make a start on these soon, just been very busy lately what with finding a new job and moving home. thank you in advance for patience.

  • The Sky is Falling
    17 years ago

    Senses
    Schools out Forever
    Haters
    Unknow lost
    Fear
    Pale Angel
    I don't know
    Bad Dreams
    Pale Angel
    Death on Christmas
    Broken Soul
    Failed Me
    Real Dreams
    Lost Life never new
    A silent lie changing my life.

    Thanks <3333

  • Jaymes Haze
    17 years ago

    I think that should be enough to cover my whole collection of poems.

  • Italian Stallion
    17 years ago

    Ok, these are the poems I did:

    I Still Know The Way To Make Your Makeup Run )Worth Four Comments)
    Dying To Feel Again (Worth Three Comments)
    Don't Waste My Time (Worth Three Comments)
    Have I Told You LLately That I Loathe You? (Worth Three Comments)
    They Brought Him Home In A Bodybag (Worth Two Comments)
    Congratulations, I Hate You (Worth Two Comments)
    Ana...You Lose (Worth Two Comments)

    Can you please do:

    Far Away, Miles Apart (Collab)
    Perfect Harmony (Collab)
    Heaven Needed a Hero (Collab)
    In Sorrow For Eternity
    It Isn't Much (Collab)
    Written With Emotions
    My Tears Shall Awaken You
    Flirtatious (Alphabet poem)
    My Heart I Give To You (Collab)
    Now And Then (Collab)
    Christmas In Heaven
    Passion within
    The Photo of You
    Starlight Night (Reprise)
    Suddenly everything has changed (collab)
    If you were...
    Loving You (Part 1)
    Loving You (Part 2)
    Loving You (Part 3)

    Thank you in advance, Joe

  • VYXSIN
    17 years ago

    Hey

    I done the first two.

    Could you please do
    1. Am i pretty enough now
    2. Pretty Ugly
    3. Rejected by the world
    4. isnt it stupid
    5. Accidental
    6. Something she forgot to mention
    7. Drunk drivers
    &&
    8. Unpretty

    Thanks in advance

    Sarah

  • Jaymes Haze
    17 years ago

    I still haven't recieved my end of the offer....

  • Robert
    17 years ago

    Please do all Of my featured work i have about 25 poems on there thanks Plot121

  • Robert
    17 years ago

    Please do all Of my featured work i have about 25 poems on there thanks Plot121

    I will be finished by tomorrow ok

  • EssenceOfLace
    17 years ago

    I did "Dying to Feel Again"

    I know you are busy, and I don't need 3 comments. I'll make it a 1 for 1.
    I just want my poem
    "The Storm (collab)"
    to be r/r/c.

    Thank you =)