Does Anyone Speak French?

If so would you PLEASE read my newest poem, [ i think it's listed as second but it is latest]
I take french in school, and although i do fairly well, i really would like to accel!

Any grammatical, poetic, spelling corrections-anything would help me!!

If you do i will comment up to 6 poems of yours.
Just tell me which!

Also, I am not one to comment with "Good job, i like it a lot.. xx" [although i may put in the kisses. =D]
So I /will/ actually comment your work.

xx [Kisses]
Lauren

Done.

r/r/c Lingering in Silence, pweeze?

Done with both..

Any more?

xx