Sad Poem "Story of a Lonely Girl" -- 1/3

Yeah, as it says, I wrote a new poem called "Story of a Lonely Girl". I would really like some feedback. So if you could r/r/c this I'll do 3 for you.

Plot:
Story of a girl who looks for love in all the wrong places.

Rules:
Must post back here to receive credit!

Other:
Enjoy the read!
Critique it properly and I will praise your comment.

(Don't go overboard to get a praise! I want an honest opinions on the poem. Example: If theres a slight flow error, don't say "The flow was off, it kinda breaks the rhythm of the poem. If you would use musical pattern to make it work etc." then give me a 4/5. Just simply state where it is so I can be more careful next time.)

Thank you :)

Done

I'm headed to bed for now, will comment tomorrow :)