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  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Hey,

    I wrote a poem for my boyfriend and want to see if it's any good before I actually show it to him, it's called "For Jon" (original I know!)

    But yeah, this a 1 for 2 deal so you can either give me titles that you want me to comment or I'll just randomly pick a couple. Please post here if you do this so I remember who I owe comments to.

    Cheers m'dears,

    Em xXx

  • Brittany
    17 years ago

    Your poem was breathtaking.
    Definitely show it to him.

    Please read:
    The Hankercheif

    and I guess anything else that catches your eye.

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    Done, any more for any more?

  • Bugg
    17 years ago

    Ok.
    Mine are 'It Still Lingers On My Breath' and any one that you pick.

  • Shinobi
    17 years ago

    A touching poem, commented and voted.

    Please comment and vote for:
    - Life carries on
    - End of a phase

    Thanks and good luck!

  • xxSnow Angelxx
    17 years ago

    Yep..Voted and commented...sure 5/5=)

    Could you please do the same for my latest poem "buried" and "my love(acrostic)"...thnx hun

    Pooja

  • Nikki
    17 years ago

    I commented it
    i really enjoyed reading it

    you're my everything
    sit with nme

    thankss