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  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Can anyone rrc my poems,

    you can do as many as you want,

    1 to 2

    rule:

    No one liners, don't forget to vote and be true on your comment!

    Thanks!

  • WrittenInTheStars
    17 years ago

    I'd love to. I don't mind which poems you read.. It doesn't really matter to me.

    Update-- I read two of your poems. Well three actually but I'll nix the last one since I did a kinda crappy comment.

  • Lizaveta
    17 years ago

    I did some of yours
    could you please rrc somwe of mine that will catch your eye?
    thnx in advance

  • Lemma
    17 years ago

    I did two. Could you please do:

    For Jon,
    I'm not gonna cry,
    Strive for imperfection,
    It's ok to cry

    Thanks =)

    Em xXx

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Bethany, It a great write!

    Write more. I'm done,

    Take care

    Thanks

    Veamm

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    I've been busy on this day,

    But after school,

    I'll surely get back to your poems

    Hey, people this is still open

    anyone else?

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Hey!

    Good day!

    Liza. Thanks.

    I'm done with your piece.

    Thanks.

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Busy again.

    Well, I'll surely get to back to you people.

    Sorry, for the delay

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Hello, Good day!

    Lemma done.

    Thanks.

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Again.

    Tasteless I'm done.

    Well sorry guys I can't criticize more on yours works. I still have a busy day and have many things to do.

    Sorry for the delays.

    Thanks!

  • Veamm
    17 years ago

    Still open.

    Anyone?

  • Vanessa
    17 years ago

    I r/r/c on I like
    Could you please do
    The End
    Thanks in advance