Once again!

Hey, Good day everyone!

I have a new poem "I like".
Hmm, can anyone RRC it for me.

I want honest comments, If there are errors just let me know. Help me out guys, I want to improve.

Well I'm really busy right now. so I think my return comment will maybe delayed for awhile.

Rule:
I'll do 2 of yours in return
Strictly no one liners.
Don't forget to vote.

Thanks!

Will do
any two of mine will do
thanks!!

Doing it.
Any two of my lowest RRC will do.
Thanks:)

Done!
Could you do two of my least r/r/c poems?
Thank you!

My two latest.. thanks hun! i'm on my way! :]

Hi, Good day everyone

Whoah,
Sorry for delay, I was busy on school so I can't attend to you guys immediately. Thanks for waiting

Everyone is done, anyone else?
Still open.

Thanks