Lizaveta's first contest

  • Lizaveta
    16 years ago

    ~~~~NEW CONTEST!!!~~~~

    Rules:
    *must rhyme
    *any genre

    you have to include at least 6 of these words in your poem:

    curtain; bliss; symphathy; mirror; purple; spark; cheer; lullaby; rime; forest; pure; maze.

    1sr place - 7 r/r/c
    2nd place - 5 r/r/c
    3rd place - 3 r/r/c
    and everyone who submits a poem will get a comment on it.

    due date is May,3rd.

    Can't wait to read)))

  • Melpomene
    16 years ago

    Edit. Sorry. Just realised my poem didn't rhyme.

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Near The Absolute Madness We Peer

    Frozen surface brake towards undefined apparitions which are grotesque,
    while metal crawlers, inflamed with rage, jump within each pore.
    I crouched under iced shutter, observing this awry arabesque,
    which, again, opened demonic lullaby, leading me into it's purple core.

    Bloodshot adieu is anguish's nest;
    scarlet mazes are liquid, through them slayer transforms
    and triple-headed visions sever, framed with sorrowful quest,
    becoming butlers of guilt, opening every door to welcome lethally performs.

    With crash of voice emotions mirror last vindicator in tattooed space,
    pure apathy sealed infesting bereavement, so now, he must
    alienate paradox of care, eliminate, with Capricorn's horn, destruction of lace
    decayed curtains move one more time and lust shatters into dust.

  • Lizaveta
    16 years ago

    I'm sorry i forgot about this..... but awwww not that much entries. but still i really enjoyed reading beautiful poems you had posted here and

    the first place is "Near The Absolute Madness We Peer" by DarkSpirit

    the second place is "A Slice of Beauty" by Lil Mizz Bitchxx

    thank you for participating!

  • Nix
    16 years ago

    Thanks a lot :]

    You can r/r/c my latest ones.