Walking The Line

I'd love some feedback on my new poem.

Please post one poem in return!

No one liners!

Thanks..

Done, nice poem :]
You can r/r/c:
-Near The Absolute Madness We Peer.

Hi there.

Done <3

Read- 4 minutes.

Commented- 12 minutes.

Rated- 7 seconds.

;]

Although, I commented like, 3 times, because the grammar went funny, so I tried to explain, then that also went funny, so I explained about that ;]

And here I am explaining about explaining about my explaining about my grammar stuff ups ;]
haha.

Well good luck - hope it helps.

And, in regards to my poem, any is fine (any recent poem written within the last 3 weeks)
I dont mind it if is quite alot shorter than mine, but I would like to praise it, so please be straight with me-- tell me where I went wrong ;]

Thanking you in advance.

-- Nicole x

Thank you guys so much. All your comments were very helpfull and appreciated!

I do however have to leave for work, I'm in Aussie time.. But I will be back on tonight & tomorrow.

If anyone else would like to leave a comment, please do.. It will help keep me busy tonight, and tomorrow, on my day off! :)

& A little hint on the poem, too. It has nothing to do with cutting, or suicide, hehe.. Walking the line is a term for a drug.

Dark Spirit is done!

Will do rest tonight!! :)

I'm in Aus time too so I know how it is. :]

I'll check it out now.

Could you please do. Muse-ic To My Ears.

Muchly appreciated.

Thankyou.

Everyone is done!! :)

Anyone else?

Thanks for commenting on mine, muchly appreciated!! ;]

And it really isn't about cutting???
Wow. Lol. Suprised ;]

- Nic. x

Lol. Yeah. It's not about cutting at all.. It's probably really easy to interperate it as that.. But It's about a completely different subject all together, hehe..

Anyone else?

Done :)

Please comment/rate: "Bitter Lust Blows"

Thanks a lot!

Thank you! & Done!!

Anyone else?

Anyone at all?

Done can you plz do my latest poem called
I CONFESS I CANT LET YOU GO
thanks