"Ladies and Gentlemen" please read!

My new poem "Ladies and Gentlemen"
is written in a way that is kinda new to me
it has a bit of a plot.
Could somebody read and comment it and tell me if its ne good?

I'll return the favor x2!!!
*example: 1 for 2, 2 for 4, 3 for 6...limit is 3*

I'll check out two of your poems.

Please do my latest

Muse-c To My Ears.
&
Any others which catch your attention.

Thanks alot. ~Mel

Thanks so much for your opinion.
Like i said, i was just tryin sumthin new.
I'm not totally in love with it either! lol

Done.

Could you please do:

'Walking The Line'

&

'Liquid'

Thanks!