I feel like commenting poems.

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    And since my poems need some helpful comments, here's the deal:

    One for Two -- Two for Three -- Three for Four .

    The titles to choose from :

    `A Painter's Masterpiece
    `Moon-Doused Memories
    `City of Sin and Lost Hope

    Please don't do more than three xD
    -- No one liners (or two, or three, or four)
    -- Honest comments, please. That are helpful .
    -- Please no nature poems; they typically make me want to fall asleep. Unless they're haikus.
    -- Please leave titles, or I will choose randomly.
    -- Please vote, or I will not vote on yours.

    Thanks, dears.
    ..__MiNDYY

  • Justin
    17 years ago

    Loved the one i read A Painter's Masterpiece.... about to go read more Can you please rate/cmnt on "My Wish" and you can random the other one =D Thanks

  • WrittenInTheStars
    17 years ago

    I read all three, commented and rated. Feel free to r/r/c whichever you want. All I ask is that you do Batteries Not Included, Untitled and Happy Birthday Bulimia after that you can do whichever you please.

    Thanks in advance,
    Bethany

  • andhereIstand
    17 years ago

    Can you commetn my featured poems? theres only four, so it won't take too mcuh time, i promise.
    thanks a ton :)
    I'll check out your sometime

  • Michael D Nalley
    17 years ago

    I did one Please do "Losers"

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    ForeverANDalwa ys -- I only do poems of those that have already done mine in this deal. Please understand, that sometimes people don't return the favour, and it's just a huge peeve that I don't wish to bring out .

    Anyhow, done . Those who only told me one title, I didn't do a second, but if you would like me to, just say the word ! :)

    Anyone else wish to pursue this deal ? :D

  • Kaila
    17 years ago

    I'll do em all
    do my latest please

  • BrokenREALiTy
    17 years ago

    Done .
    Anyone else ?

  • Sheyvonne
    17 years ago

    Can you plsssss read, comment, and rate my poems thanx alot.....

  • SuicideNotes2Poems
    17 years ago

    Done. and yes i rated.

    so can you please do
    1. "a dead body and a broken heart"
    2. "theft"
    thank. =]

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